In this poem we experience some of the feelings of a third person seeing a traveler, and how this "Okie Girl" must feel. In this poem we are given examples of how these experiences has changed them. Like in the novel, The Grapes of Wrath, people want to move west for the oppurtunites as well as a fresh start at life. This poem expresses how many feelings this girl feels and how in the end they "love" the adventure.
David Nelson
Okie Girl
When I look at you,
I see my version of heaven
with all the stars that fill the skies
right there in your eyes
When I look at you,
I see my dreams come true
everything I ever wanted
everything I ever needed
When I look at you,
I see the sadness on your face
I hear the tears come falling down
the tears I sometimes cause
When I look at you,
I feel the pain you have inside you
I hear the laughter you sometimes release
the laughter I sometimes create
When I look at you,
I weep because I cannot have you
I cry because I cannot please you
feelings of ineptness fill my mind
When I look at you,
I know I have no answers
no ways of resolution
to fill your void
When I look at you,
I condemn the day I wandered in
into your life to complicate
into your world where I had no place
When I look at you,
I know no way to step aside
to leave where I do not belong
to put things back where they were
When I look at you,
I wonder how are lives will ever be
ever be the same again
ever be the way we want them to be
When I look at you I know
I cannot ever be with you
I do not want to be without you
I depise my life and the mess I have made
when I look at you
I wonder if you will ever forgive me
I wonder how I will go on if you don't
I know how much I love you
Gomer LePoet...
http://hellopoetry.com/words/149614/okie/poems/
When I look at you,
I see my version of heaven
with all the stars that fill the skies
right there in your eyes
When I look at you,
I see my dreams come true
everything I ever wanted
everything I ever needed
When I look at you,
I see the sadness on your face
I hear the tears come falling down
the tears I sometimes cause
When I look at you,
I feel the pain you have inside you
I hear the laughter you sometimes release
the laughter I sometimes create
When I look at you,
I weep because I cannot have you
I cry because I cannot please you
feelings of ineptness fill my mind
When I look at you,
I know I have no answers
no ways of resolution
to fill your void
When I look at you,
I condemn the day I wandered in
into your life to complicate
into your world where I had no place
When I look at you,
I know no way to step aside
to leave where I do not belong
to put things back where they were
When I look at you,
I wonder how are lives will ever be
ever be the same again
ever be the way we want them to be
When I look at you I know
I cannot ever be with you
I do not want to be without you
I depise my life and the mess I have made
when I look at you
I wonder if you will ever forgive me
I wonder how I will go on if you don't
I know how much I love you
Gomer LePoet...
http://hellopoetry.com/words/149614/okie/poems/
The assignment was to write a poem - not find a poem and copy it...
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